Re: DRAFT: Baton Rouge remarks

Agree - would be good to put health care and AA higher up.

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> On Sep 20, 2015, at 3:13 PM, LaDavia Drane
<ldrane@hillaryclinton.com> wrote:
>
> Remarks aren't necessarily targeted at
the Af Am community even though
> our audience will be heavily Af Am as
planned. Thinking this might be
> a missed messaging opportunity.
>
>
Nevertheless, she'll be at a predominately Af Am educational
> institution and
very close to many other black educational
> institutions. This is a great
opportunity to talk about the
> disparities in education, especially as it
relates to the Af Am
> community. Also, should give credit to this community
which has
> created a educational safety net for its Af Am children, one
that
> would not exist but for intentional efforts by people in this
>
community.
>
> African American Outreach Director
> Hillary for America
>
LDrane@hillaryclinton.com
>
>
>> On Sep 20, 2015, at 12:42 PM, Lauren
Peterson <lpeterson@hillaryclinton.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi everyone -
>>
>>
Attached is a draft for tomorrow's organizing event in Baton Rouge. It's a
version of the latest stump speech, but with more health care, a jab at Jindal,
a shout out to POTUS this weekend at Marlon's suggestion, and some messaging
around racial disparities.
>>
>> Holler with your edits.
>>
>>
Thanks!
>>
>> Lauren
>>
>> <2015-09-20 Draft Baton Rouge Event
1215pm.docx>