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Re: DRAFT: Baton Rouge remarks
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'Mandy Grunwald' via Speech Drafts Sep 20, 2015 4:08 PM
I tracked changes in the health care section to punch up the GOP contrast.
Mandy Grunwald
Grunwald Communications
202 973-9400
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Subject: Re: DRAFT: Baton Rouge remarks
From: Karen Finney <kfinney@hillaryclinton.com>
To: LaDavia Drane <ldrane@hillaryclinton.com>
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Subject: Re: DRAFT: Baton Rouge remarks
Agree - would be good to put health care and AA higher up. Sent from my iPhone > On Sep 20, 2015, at 3:13 PM, LaDavia Drane <ldrane@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: > > Remarks aren't necessarily targeted at the Af Am community even though > our audience will be heavily Af Am as planned. Thinking this might be > a missed messaging opportunity. > > Nevertheless, she'll be at a predominately Af Am educational > institution and very close to many other black educational > institutions. This is a great opportunity to talk about the > disparities in education, especially as it relates to the Af Am > community. Also, should give credit to this community which has > created a educational safety net for its Af Am children, one that > would not exist but for intentional efforts by people in this > community. > > African American Outreach Director > Hillary for America > LDrane@hillaryclinton.com > > >> On Sep 20, 2015, at 12:42 PM, Lauren Peterson <lpeterson@hillaryclinton.com> wrote: >> >> Hi everyone - >> >> Attached is a draft for tomorrow's organizing event in Baton Rouge. It's a version of the latest stump speech, but with more health care, a jab at Jindal, a shout out to POTUS this weekend at Marlon's suggestion, and some messaging around racial disparities. >> >> Holler with your edits. >> >> Thanks! >> >> Lauren >> >> <2015-09-20 Draft Baton Rouge Event 1215pm.docx>
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