RE: Follow up

needs editing. . he didnt protest his innocence he proclaimed it. . too many flowery adjectives. takes away from fact. not even NO THERE was not a rape culture, . a firm denial. , suggesting sam didnt do well in high school irrelevant. . stressing off campus, too factual and not the issue . just a few thoughts

Jeffrey:

With renewed thanks for your hospitality last week, here's the chapter we discussed. You're very kind to look at it.

I've circled back to the lawyers re the concern you mentioned. We'll see, but I predict a green light. And it would be a two-edged sword, and they know it.

No word from our friends beyond the seas.

Cheers, Ken

relevant to the facts , but doesnt rebuff the culture issue that the feminazis propagate

Thank you! You're a prince.

Good points. A professional editor is chewing on it as I write. Disagree re off campus. Hugely relevant.

Gratefully, Ken

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Righto. I'm pulling my punches. I'll reconsider.

Hugs, Ken