Re: great fun

not bad„ but does not tie together , the language needs a great deal of work, also filled with platitudes that i told you cnnot be part of it. broaden perscpetives etc, intinemtiaonl realtions etc. I will try to find some time in the next few days

2011/9/30

This morning I included the things we discussed. I talk about vizualisation and funny moments: United Nations and debating in different languages. I say that i dreamt about living in a foreign country and my dream had realized : i won a scholarship from Rotary to study abroad... I wrote how tough it was to study law in french school, earning money myself..

I send you 2 new versions: one of them includes the paragraphe explaining why I want to study at HLS and the other one does not because I am not allowed to have more than 2 pages..

BUT It is still disorganized - I do not how to make this abundant information flow correctly... I would love you to help me with organizing all the ideas you find inside and the English language sound as beautiful as it sounds in the first paragraphe Jeffrey

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more about visualizing„ , it was a trining method.. visualixze , the pipe. visialulize path of greatest„ speed. End the peice with visualizeing being handed a harvard law school diplaoma, and again , this time your.

2011/9/30

I will be very glad to come swimming to spend time with you in one of the next few days if I can...

I sent my personal statement - she wanted to have an example of one

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people need to smell each other.

2011/9/30

All right

what does it mean parents in the audience right side up?

Tonight I will be participating in a recorded TV debate simulation. It is the public speaking training program. My topic is International organizations, UN in particular. I have to defend it and my opponent will critic it. Do you have any strong arguments FOR the existence of UN ?the arguments noone else would think of..

getting better, put your parents in the first paragraph as part of the spectators. , seeing your dads hands

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, this way we will end the same way. you shoudl addd the importance in training to visualization.
2011/10/1

this version is all about visualization.. what do you think of it? though it needs to be only 2 pages it is more fun to read now

Jeffrey, imagine we are taking coffee at Cambridge; you came here to give a lecture at Harvard. The nature around is fantastic: orange yellow red leaves are falling down, the bright blue sky is above us and it is still warm outside.. We are recalling the fall 2011 and you say what a wondetfuljob we've done! You personal statement stood out andI am so glad we got you to the HLS

visualization.. I am all about it now

are classes at the sorboone ?

2011/10/2 < >

Schedule - from 9 till 18 -work, classes till 20 all days till wednesday

Will we have time to finish The statement and send it? All The info is In The paper Just need to make english sound beautiful !!

Tonight i'm at vendome from 18

not attend ,, but i would like to meet you and see the school

2011/10/2 < >

yes, at sorbonne, near Luxembourg garden. you want to attend?

no

2011/10/3 < >

i thought maybe to include in my statement the fact that together with my friend we found a snowboard school in moscow to teach kds how to snowboard after the olympics so they can see that i earned my own money to come to study in france... It is not true that i found/registered my own school but its true that i used to give snowboarding classes. Making your own business from nothing at the age of 17-18 sounds better though.. tell me what do you think of this lie