Re: Follow up

needs editing. . he didnt protest his in=ocence he proclaimed it.. too many flowery adjectives.=C2 takes away from fact. not even NO THERE was not a rape c=lture, . a firm denial. , suggesting sam didnt do =ell in high school irrelevant. . stressing off campus, too factual and not =he issue . just a few thoughts

Jeffrey:

With renewed thanks for your hospitality last week, =ere's the chapter we discussed. You're very kind to =ook at it.

I've circled back to the lawyers re the conc=rn you mentioned. We'll see, but I predict a green light. =A0 And it would be a two-edged sword, and they know it.

No word from our friends beyond the seas. <=u>

Cheers, Ken

Thank you! You're a prince.

Good points. A pr=fessional editor is chewing on it as I write. Disagree re off campus= Hugely relevant.

Gratefully, Ken

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relevant to the facts , but doesnt rebuff the =ulture issue that the feminazis propagate