Re: fyi

Here is the memo I plan to submit to the University. Nancy convinced me to rewrite the memo to remove most of the personal references to me. Anyway, for your (confidential) edification, and any comments..

I suggest modifying your declarations by "I believe". not "this is". It is passive aggressive. Too many mentions of the fact that you can sue them. You should copy a lawyer on it. Ask for their opinions instead of telling them the conclusions.