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Re: Fist draft!
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Astrid Gil-Casare Nov 6, 2017 11:54 PM
Es un muy, muy incipient= borrador pero me encantaría que lo leyeses
Gracias!!!!! Lo aprecio muc=o
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Astrid Gil-Casares Dec 4, 2017 3:26 PM
NOFLICT= NO CONFLICT?
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jeffrey E. Dec 4, 2017 8:29 PM
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Astrid Gil-Casares
the conflict the tension is not enhanced by th= chldren or mother finding the supermarket or the tirade regarding c=eaig products. EVERY page must be relevant and if =t is taken out and not missed should not be in the first=place.
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jeffrey E. Dec 4, 2017 8:53 PM
i like your fetish with loc=smith line. but much of it is too common. children=insupermarket for first time with fromerly rich mom. migule fe=pe. . . also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black lin=erie in bed? :)
NOFLICT charactere development.=C2* littel , this is a story not a film