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Re: Fist draft!
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Astrid Gil-Casares Dec 4, 2017 3:45 PM
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jeffrey E.
i like your fetish with locksmith line. but much of it is too common. children in supermarket for first time with formerly rich mom. migule felpe. also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black lingerie in bed
NOFLICT character development. little, this is a story not a film
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jeffrey E. Dec 4, 2017 8:47 PM
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Astrid Gil-Casares
it was the word for gown that got confused.