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I still have to write about her job (she is a children book writer and will be in between scenes already written), 3 more comic scenes I have already in my mind and the end.

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What would you change about Felipe? It has to be a man that attracts women. Miguel just a friend, not really important for the plot, could change him easily. Juan can't change much about him (he is real but can't talk much about him since my ex).

What about Olivia?
Gaelle?

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No! That is my mother. She is about to get an operation on her leg. She is definitely not with lingerie, just with the hospital gown. That scene is about being caught by the doctor with wine, pistachios (both mother and daughter drinking) and Gaelle a white mask on while in hospital (thinking nurses shifts were finished, which they were btw!). The doctor stays to take the mother's pressure etc while she doesn't know what to do with the glass wine and Gaelle doesn't know how to talk seriously with her mask I.

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i like your fetish with locksmith line. but much of it is too common. children in supermarket for first time with formerly rich mom. miguel felipe. . . also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black lingerie in bed? :)

NOFLICT character development. little , this is a story not a film

in the hospital bed