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I s=ill have to write about her job (she is a children book writer and will be=in between scenes already written), 3 more comic scenes I have already in =y mind and the end.

What=would you change about Felipe? It has to be a man that attracts women. Mig=el just a friend, not really important for the plot, could change him easi=y. Juan can't change much about him (he is real but can't =alk much about him since my ex).

What about Olivia?
Ga=lle?

No! That is my=mother. She is about to get an operation on her leg. She is definitely not=with lingerie, just with the hospital gown. That scene is about being caug=t by the doctor with wine, pistachos (both mother and daughter drinking) a=d Gaelle a white mask on while on hospital (thinking nurses shifts where f=nished, which they were btw!). The doctor stays to take the mother =99s pressure etc while she doesn't know what to do with the glass =ine and Gaelle doesn't know how to talk seriously with her mask I.

I m aware of the concept. but while amusing .=C2 doesnt move the story along. the tempo must drive =ou to the next scene. however keep in mind =C2 this is not what i do. ask about income inequality =and i will expalin that on world wide basis including of=course india and china income inequlaity has shrunk by a large margi=.

i like your fetish with locksm=th line. but much of it is too common. children in=upermarket for first time with fromerly rich mom. migule felpe= . . also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black linger=e in bed? :)

NOFLICT charactere development. =AO littel , this is a story not a film