RE: Max's Essay for your review
Dear Jeffrey,
Attached is Max's essay as requested.
Please let me know your thoughts.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Eric Roth
President
International Jet Interiors
2221 Smithtown Avenue
Long Island MacArthur Airport
Ronkonkoma. NY 11779
not good at all.---boring,, not well organized,,, limited vocab, read it,, do you find it interesting,, imagine the guy/girl reading it after reading 200 others,, he will put it down without going through it.
This is all new to me as my children are only 11 & 13.
I read through the Essay prior to sending it to you and I agree with you.
What specifically do most colleges look for with regard to "content- ( after your e-mail I understand that the Essay should provoke great interest to the reader)?
Perhaps I need to understand the "purpose" of "The Essay"?
Sincerely,
Eric Roth
President
International Jet Interiors
2221 Smithtown Avenue
Long Island MacArthur Airport
Ronkonkoma, NY 11779