Re: great fun yesterday

This morning I included the things we discussed.

• I talk about visualization and funny moments: United Nations and debating in different languages. I say that i dreamt about living in a foreign country and my dream had realized: i won a scholarship from Rotary to study abroad... I wrote how tough it was to study law in french school, earning money myself..

• I send you 2 new versions: one of them includes the paragraph explaining why I want to study at HLS and the other one does not because I am not allowed to have more than 2 pages..

• BUT It is still disorganized - I do not how to make this abundant information flow correctly... I would love you to help me with organizing all the ideas you find inside and the English language sound as beautiful as it sounds in the first paragraph Jeffrey

I will be very glad to come swimming to spend time with you in one of the next few days if I can...

I sent

my personal statement - she wanted to have an example of one

not bad, but does not tic together, the language needs a great deal of work, also filled with platitudes that i told you ennot be part of it. broaden perspectives etc, international relations etc. I will try to find some time in the next few days