From: Kathy Ruemmler <M Sent: Wednesday, April 15, 2015 2:51 PM To: Jeffrey E. New version of the story is much improved. Still have =ome concerns about certain aspects of it that I think could use further ex=lanation. Big question is: does it help? About to take off to Des Moines. More later. 1 EFTA_R1_01444511 EFTA02404692