From: ehbarak To: "Jeffrey E." <jeevacation@gmail.com> Subject: Re: Date: Thu, 30 Nov 2017 00:45:42 +0000 Hi Jeff I always open by nature for any criticism. Even enjoy it in a way. Will call you on 2100. I just really can do only a little bit about it, except for telling the editor that I've got it from a person I highly appreciate and drive him to put their best guy to deal with it. Best EB Sent from my iPhone On 29 Nov 2017, at 18:59, jeffrey E. <jeevacation@gmail.com> wrote: I am sensitive to sounding too harsh. I feel as if my cousin is playing the violin for the first performance , and it borders on the painful to listen. cute but painful. The english is awkward and makes it almost impossible to read. but finally , yet. finally yet but plus a few more buts and ors and finally . I think every paragraph needs a college professor to review and edit it needs a redo if you are serious about the english version . please note The information contained in this communication is confidential, may be attorney-client privileged, may constitute inside information, and is intended only for the use of the addressee. It is the property of JEE Unauthorized use, disclosure or copying of this communication or any part thereof is strictly prohibited and may be unlawful. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately by return e-mail or by e-mail to jeevacation®gmail.com, and destroy this communication and all copies thereof, including all attachments. copyright -all rights reserved EFTA00945382